A good concept but what does it mean? You keep jumping back to the back of Preston. What do the other locations have to do with the video. Otherwise it was a good video
im not exactly sure what was going on but it seems like your loop starts from preston and goes through the other buildings and then back to preston. Good use of transitions and shots
This feels really random. The fade to black doesn't work very well for the ending because it doesn't appear anywhere else in the video. There are some exposure problems. Needs more of a cohesive story than a series of still shots.
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A good concept but what does it mean? You keep jumping back to the back of Preston. What do the other locations have to do with the video. Otherwise it was a good video
im not exactly sure what was going on but it seems like your loop starts from preston and goes through the other buildings and then back to preston. Good use of transitions and shots
This feels really random. The fade to black doesn't work very well for the ending because it doesn't appear anywhere else in the video. There are some exposure problems. Needs more of a cohesive story than a series of still shots.
The music set a nice mood but it was very repetitive. I liked the transitions but I'm not sure what you were trying to show.
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